Trying
To get inside
To the dark and painfilled
Recesses of your hidden mind.
Trying to reach you though I know it's hard
For you to see why I love you
Or to realise why
I'll always be
Trying
A contest entry
- Many Options by piccola.
900 points, ended December 14, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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great rict!!! The count is right on and it begins and ends the way it should. Thank you for entering the contest.
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Enjoyable read and very poignant in that so many people don't realize or understand that love is love whether or not they feel they deserve it. Well done.
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