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Eat Me

I'm a fruit cake, don't you know
Port soaked raisins  make you glow
Take a bite and you will see
All the fruits that make up me.

Dressed to kill, with topping white
Taste a slice, I'm yours tonight
Come now eat up every crumb
From my icing to my bum

A contest entry

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  • Melodies
    December 8, 2007

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    Ah, adorable, don't you know?

    Sweet cake poem from a talented poet! Darling lines with spiffy rhyming that is just RIGHT!


  • queen Moderators member
    December 5, 2007
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    This is cute, Good luck in the contest