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[ Can you hear my lonely heart ]

Can you hear my lonely heart

Slowly being torn apart?

Nothing has been going right

The pain’s been keeping me up all night

I always try to do my best

To give my all, to pass the test

But every time, I fall back down

This negativity all around

Is driving my poor heart insane

Crashing like a waterfall after the rain

Someone, please, before I’m gone

Throw a lifeline for me to grab on

I can’t take it anymore

I’ve never felt this much before

And now I’m sitting here, while my heart

Is slowly being torn apart…

I was in a really crappy mood this week. Don't ask.

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  • Blooming Poet
    December 7, 2007

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    Even though this poem is very sad and depressing it is also beautiful. I can feel all your pain, lonely hearts are very painful.