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The Cupid Neglects Ann No More

The blazing embers of lonliness have died out and the jukebox

band no longer plays Taps. For Cupid has had

a vibrant change

of vision.

The treacherous grace still exists

with it's own dash

of compassion.

The Cupid no longer neglects Ann

because it's with her.

Sure, it doesn't make sense

but Love never does.

Author notes

This is the second part of the Ann poems, the first one titled "The Cupid Neglects Ann Always" - about how Love avoided a certain girl, then eventually finds her.

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  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    January 8, 2008

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    very well written, thank you for adding it to my contest. I enjoyed the read, it's quite a different approach to looking at how love doesn't make sense. The very best of luck to you. xXx