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Passing On

The sands of time had slipped through their fingers.
They had lived and loved,
and before they knew it,
they joined the others beyond,
leaving the place from which they had come.
All that was left in the world was silenced forever.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 14, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'Day mate ♥

    What a beautiful write that seems so lovely yet so sad at the same time.

    Best of luck to you in the contest
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda