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Picture Perfect Life

fractured glass
from a picture perfect life
is cutting deep
into the pulse,
tearing my soul,
leaving me bleeding,
as blackness reflects
off the fragments -
of a picture perfect life.

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  • Sparow
    January 7, 2008

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    This one packs a punch....I can see alot of peoples lifes in this....great write..maybe a little idea off and of maybe one nedds to go ....from or for.....great job