Looking around
you search for some miracle.
Nothing rises here anymore.
Days turning to liquid .
Hoping for the break
that will send you soaring.
Feet stuck though, seem to be sinking.
Angels standing guard.
Surrounding the area, wings flapping high.
You are no longer drowning, breathe again.
Author notes
picture prompt: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2380838
thoughts on when one is no longer tied down to the past and finding the courage to hope again
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired # 5 by cirque du soleil.
300 points, ended December 8, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I should have won the gold! (Silver trophy pre-writes) by Keith E. Gerber.
650 points, ended September 2, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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good job
Thank you for your entry. I regret that I can only give one gold.
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the courage to hhope again, is a huge step in anyones life and the pain you display here is so touching, i can relate. i love this especially here:
Surrounding the area, wings flapping high.
You are no longer drowning, breathe again.
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Thanks for the entry and for following rules. :f
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I love this. Very awesome poem!
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Excellent Piece
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thank you my dear i kinda like how this turned out so i thank you for reading my work
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