empty reminders
dull the senses
irritate
with glasses
whiskey lies
lost desire
new party
indulgences
Author notes
Bottled Beliefs
the morning after
no one noticed . . shaped like a glass
A contest entry
- Bottled Beliefs - three hour contest by CarolDesjarlais.
600 points, ended December 6, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shape of Impact by Gossamer Guile.
900 points, ended December 20, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very concise. Like it a lot. Thanks for taking the time to enter!
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I am wondering about "irritate with glasses" something more angsty might apply here... ty for your entry....
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thanks to shewolfnative
the irritate was because of "one more drink" . . !!
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Hm, makes me think this one
Not loving the center alignment, but that's really just a personal preference of mine.
I like the brevity of this.
Good luck in the contest.
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thanks
I like the brevity also . . !!
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