Corruption replaced with sweet surrender
Holding his hand so sweet and tender
Voluptuous lust lost in deep blue eyes
Fire inside as they look deeply into mine
Vibration so intense in too steep
No wound can penetrate the love that’s too deep
Fluffy white doves floating over our heads
Laughter and excitement racing like little kids
Speaking of the future no longer forbidden
Losing our reality in our sensational love filled heaven
Touch to touch and heart to heart
Joined together as one never to be torn apart
Kisses and love to wrap us around
Dancing in our affection never to be found
Only together forever
Only us forever together
Author notes
OPTION: Love
the first one I have written for my boyfriend... I was so afraid of hearbreak that I refused to write one, he was sad, but here is the outcome of waiting....
HOPE YOU LIKE
A contest entry
- Options, Options, && Ooh - OPTIONS! by Shadow Darkstar.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
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900 points, ended December 29, 2007, 21 entries
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950 points, ended April 8, 2008, 49 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Love Poems by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 43 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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cute poem, I really liked it.
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awww thats so sweet i love it, thank you for entering and good luck
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very sweet
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beautiful poem and some great lines!!
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In my rule with asteriks (*) around it, poems can't have won trophy before!!!! But i then looked and saw that it only won 2 days ago, so i'll let it slide, but only once, very inspriational.... i loved it and can relate...
Very good write and thanks for entering,
Annie Shadows
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beautiful write..This poem is well shaped till the ending..keep up the good work and congrats for thee silver trophy..
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Awe. This is very sweet and I liked this very much, considering the topic and my own current situation with it. The rhyming isn't too bad, and I could image every detail you've managed to write here, a clear picture as you describd everything. Very touching. Best of luck to you and your boyfriend.
See what happens to those who wait?
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