The sands of time are shifting
The waves are roaring strong
Come back to me my darling
I know I've done you wrong
Forgive me for the cruel way
That I have treated you
Come back to me forever to stay
For I love you so very true
You are my life, my love, my own
You are my love I've always known
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired # 5 by cirque du soleil.
300 points, ended December 8, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an interesting take on the prompts, but now I can see the connection, you have given me another angle and perspective. I too, like your rhyming.
I enjoyed reading your work here.
David
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Temptation
That is what this poem is, and if they don't get it leave them alone. Like having a table set and yoe is too good to eat what is served...mac
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Thank you Mac. I just love your view of my poem. I am still laughing. Thanks for stopping by..
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-sighs-
Such a longing for love, and I like the way you rhyme here, it works nicely with the contest you have displayed from your heart. All the best in life and love my friend.
Peace, -Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Thanks Tim for your comments. They are greatly apreciated. Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas.
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