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Cold

I'm sorry I hurt you
I wanted to open up
but i showed you a part of me
that no one should ever see

You kept me from the edge
but i pushed you away

Basically i'm sorry
for being me
the ice queen
the heartless monster

I'm always setting the
stakes too high
All you wanted to do
was boost me up
but i pushed you farther down

I never wanted to say goodbye
I wanted to tell you everything
but we're through and i'm sorry

Maybe i'll change
but for now i'm sorry
for being so cold

Author notes

My fave song cold from Crossfade ^_^

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    March 28, 2008

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    I haven't heard that song either...

    i love the words in it though....i'm sure we can all
    relate...really boldly done, and well written!
    well done poetess, well done!
    ears/Seattle.


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 19, 2008

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    wow never heard the song but love this poem,lol
    your great keep this up love you bunches of bunches,

    endless-lover


  • Aiyoris Maryian
    December 5, 2007

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    I love that song, too! I know how that is. You want to say, "Here, take me!" but you just can't. Not that you don't want to, but you CAN'T. Lovely entry...

    Empress Aiyoris Aaklinan