Dark horizons,
Emptiness within,
As one tree stands,
Remembering the shameless demons,
The wrath they scorned on my beautiful earth.
I shine down on whats left,
As all my followers drift up with me.
As I banish the demons into the open sea.
We will rebuild,
Demon free.
Author notes
Honest opinions please.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired # 5 by cirque du soleil.
300 points, ended December 8, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I want honest opinions on this.
Comments
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I like this poem and the words, however it makes me wonder what life would be like if we had no demonds to blame...
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nice poem, refreshing write. I like the opening stanza. we were born in the same year!
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Really an interesting idea. I liked that ended on a hopeful note. Best wishes.
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This one, in all honesty--I find find a bit unusal, but quite interesting. You have a great way of expressing yourself, and developing your theme.
David
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