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I Watch On

Watching over this world,
Atop this mountain high.
I see all the pain that most people deny.
I know the truth,
So does God.
I wait for each and every one of you.
Lifting you up to heaven,
And for some banishing you to hell.
You can't see me,
But I wait and I watch.

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  • Arizona Sunset
    May 25, 2008

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    interesting take on the prompt...would be afraid she might banish me lol blessings always~ Trisha


  • poet2angels gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    Unique take on the prompt
    TY for entering!

    Lynda