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That Was the One

The discovery of life on the inside
has make the world drop dead:
midweek paralysis.

Author notes

I found out I was pregnant on a Wednesday. I was a little a little a little scared at the moment.
(Writing this as I hold the 5-week-old in my lap.)

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    December 8, 2007
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    Certainly creative and grasping... x


  • Malabu
    December 5, 2007

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    I like what you've written...though I feel if you change life on the inside has made* the world drop dead...it will be as you intended?
    Mal


    • rsheafer
      December 5, 2007
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      I don't understand what you mean. Care to explain?