God doesn't allow us to choose our daughters
and this is good
because otherwise everyone would choose you
and when God thought of daughters
he laughed with satisfaction and framed it quickly
so rich, so deep, so divine, and so very full of soul
for conception was mixed with power and beauty
Mothers chosen by God are given the gift of love
the beautiful daughter , the forever picture of perfection
percieved in her eyes,
a daughter is the truest friend she can have
with daily strokes of beauty and meaning
you will always be the painted love
on the canvas of her heart.
A contest entry
- Creations From The Heart Daughters by creationsfromheart.
375 points, ended December 10, 2007, 8 entries
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Nice Poem.
This rings true. Very clever way of depicting a lot of emotion. Thanks for entering my contest.
Andy -
a mother's love goes beyond all else
and a daughter is an angel given for our love -
oh this is very beautiful! i love the way you wrote it!
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A lovely write. Heartfelt. Lovely expression of emotion. Very nice metaphor. Well penned and much enjoyed.
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This is really sweet...great images spoken from the heart! Best of luck in this contest
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Hi thank you for the entry and submission
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This is beautiful - good luck
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