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All They Want

All she wants is to be next to him at night,
To see him as she wakes,
To feel his heart beat next to her ear
As her head lays on his chest.

But this cannot be,
No, it cannot be.

All he wants is to be next to her at night,
To see her as he wakes,
To push the hair from her face,
As her head lays on his chest.

But this cannot be,
No, it cannot be.

All she wants is to hold him as he cries,
To kiss away the tears,
To hold his shaking body
As his soul pours out in the night.

But this cannot be,
No, it cannot be.

All he wants is to hold her as she cries,
To kiss away the tears,
To wrap his arms around her tight,
As her soul pours out in the night.

But this cannot be,
No, it cannot be.

It almost was,
Yes, almost.

Author notes

Alright. i wrote this, sittin' in a suburban on my way to State CDE's for FFA. Don't know what that is? Ask!

It took me about thirty seconds to write, and then about five minutes to review, and edit.

I'm just telling you all this, I was having a negative moment. Plus the song "Almost" was blaring through my earbuds/headphones. I plan on my and Scott's relationship to keep going. I don't plan, no,I KNOW IT!

I love you Scott, getcha Pull!

Bon apetit!

Oh My GoD....Oh So EmO

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  • Rebel Meets Rebel
    December 12, 2007

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    sorry if all my comments seem to be repeatitive, but I believe you captured our emotions in this one perfectly. It makes my own emotions want to pour out, but I'm stuck in a rut b/c as of the 8th, as you know I haven't been able to do much except express my hatred for the man who took away a very influential guitarist, but enough about my piddly assed problems that nobody but I will ever be able to fully understand...don't even know if I'll ever be able to understand it. but I promise I'll get back to writing about us, I'll just need time, with you by my side I'll get back to it.

    I love you more than words can say Allie


    • vampire of thought
      December 12, 2007
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      No, love, it makes me feel good you take the time to read my poetry.

      I know that it hurts for you love, and I don't really know how to compare, or even understand this loss. Sort of like this morning, my dad was playing a Beach Boys Song about this actor who died.

      yeah.

      Love, I know you love me, and I know you're in a rut right now.

      I love you, and our love cannot be defined.

      Love,
      your allie-catt