You have always looked away from others,
a little higher, and somewhere out there.
You had more than a silver spoon in your mouth,
your soul was engraved by greater hands than man's.
Who pushed you to excell?
What drove you to better the rest?
You, pushed you.
When did you finally push everyone else away?
Where did it get you,except away from us,
a little higher, and somewhere out there.
A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickie...10/10L/30 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended December 5, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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Great take on the prompt.
TY for entering
Lynda
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Good.
I see that their are many out there who feel they are better, or I myself think I'm worse.. Who knows.. But one thing is for sure.. They seem to lack compassion.. and the where abouts to uplift ya when you need some uplifting. Thanks for sharing, a very good piece. All the best in life and love.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~



