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Virgin Of The Ages


She is the moral force of unrequited fulfillment.
A dimension of beauty beyond purpose.
In quest for love, beneath her gown,
she is untouched on a pedestal of ages.

She calls to all men of courage, 
to place at her feet,
their hearts in a language
of love.

And of few,
only one, will be chosen.





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  • Stardust-luvr
    December 9, 2007

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    awesome my dear friend virtue and chiveralry is deff not dead with wonderful men as you. to write of it in languages of heartfelt love placed at her feet in similar knightly honor. well done and many blessings always xxxx


  • poet2angels gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    So wonderful this is

    "She calls to all men of courage,
    to place at her feet,
    their hearts in a language
    of love."

    So lovely...Reminds me of an old classic movie in all it's roomance...

    Lynda


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    Very good take on the contest prompt. I liked this one, my friend - the power of choice and the purity here. Yes, a woman likes a man of courage

    ~ Nicolette