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Touch and Feel

Your fingertips trace
A feathery path,
Ghosting deliciously
Along my
Bare skin.
Goosebumps tickle
As you touch
And feel;
Drawing
Small cirles
Around my navel.
Now
You caress the
Soft skin
Of my lower
Stomach;
"No, that's mine...
Oh I suppose,
Maybe a little."
Your warm hand
Sinks
Into my jeans..
Oh!
That feeling's new,
Never
Felt
This
Before.
Warm fingertips
Gently stroke and
I sigh.
It might be wrong
But it feels so
Right!
In that moment
I think
I began to love you
Even
More.

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 14, 2007
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    Very sensual and lovely gave me goose bumps


  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 6, 2007
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    Very sensual, but having just noticed your age from your profile perhaps I shouldn't say that!


    • jazz-cat
      December 6, 2007
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      Just because of my age doesn't mean I can't write!!


      • cricketjeff gold member
        December 6, 2007
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        Clearly not!
        Well written indeed although to get three clappies for me it has to rhyme and flow


  • Commodore Rouge
    December 5, 2007

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    I agree with Denika. I do not usually read innapropriate stuff, and I don't consider this as something raunchy. This really sounds like something you had fun writing.


  • denika
    December 5, 2007

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    wow i think that you have just turned me on... lol

    but this is a really good write.. and it is not raunchy.. which is a good thing...

    but i like this write..

    Denika

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