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Overcome By Darkness

I sit and wait for it

To take me away

As darkness rises

My purity gone

All that was me

Lays defeated

In one motion

In one word

Your words of hate

Corrodes the love left in me

Until no fight is in me

Still you continue

Breaking me

Till nothing is left

A broken mind

Overcome by darkness

Is all that is left of me

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  • IamRemy
    December 5, 2007
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    Corrode..good word.

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