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Closing night.

I don't want to know, I don't want to hear,
your upload is slow, your icon is fear.
I don't want to glow, I don't want to shine,
please, just go, I will be fine.

I don't need your age, I don't need this day,
I'm stuffing the sage, but it's quite okay.
Open the page, it's my new play,
built on rage and loathe to stay.

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  • rhondasail
    February 7, 2008
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    I can't say I get this entirely, but the emote is one of 'in your face' and 'out of mine'...sort of a lingual finger wave...lol...I like the honesty of it and it seems others are more in tune with your inspiration than I. And, as I am coming to see in much of your writes, your rhyme is excellent, simple, but excellent. Peace, Rhonda


  • MsWizard
    January 3, 2008

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    I've read this one several times now and get a different perspective every time I read it. This is an excellent piece. I have panic disorder and I relate very closely to much of what you've said here.


  • anaisnais
    December 7, 2007

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    Hey it sounds like some one has just had enough, a feeling we can probably all relate too at some time or other - when you just want people to go so you can be in peace a while! Good write

  • riffraff12000
    December 6, 2007

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    Nice

    I suffer from severe depression, and this is how I feel alot of the time when it hits me hard. Sometimes you want to be with someone, but mostly you jsut want to be alone, wishig people would let you be.

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