My dearest daughter, how special you are
Like magic dust from a falling star
All the pretty colors in a rainbow hue
Remind me so much of the beauty in you
Like the morning sun, your smile does glow
Shedding its warmth on those you know
A beautiful shine, like the moon at night
Bathing your face in the softest light
Add these up and you will see
Forever you’ll mean the world to me
A beautiful flower in a mother’s bouquet
Your soul blooms brighter every day
In a list
A contest entry
- Creations From The Heart Daughters by creationsfromheart.
375 points, ended December 10, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wonderful tribute to your daughter. she is lucky to have you. thanks for sharing.
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Wow, nothing is like a mother's love. Thanks for your entries into my contest
lol
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A beautiful poem. It brought my daughter's pretty little face to mind while reading it. She's my tomboy princess... but I know that is only for now and I am reluctant to let it go too . I've been blessed with 4 children but only one daughter and watching her turning into a strong, intelligent, graceful, beautiful lady is both wonderful and miserable for me.
s and best wishes always... ~Genie~
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A beautiful write. Deep expression of emotion. Very good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, nice alliteration, assonance and simile. Your love for your daughter shines bright in this piece. Well penned and much enjoyed. Congratulations on winning Gold. Well deserved.
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Great
thought I would win but this has more magic in it!
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Truly a beautiful and awe inspiring poem. Very well penned indeed
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Beauty
Such a wonderful poem indeed the flow of it,
is so loving and holds beauty! -
ahhh...this is who you are...
a MOTHER...that is your grand purpose in the world...God made YOU to be a Mom...
and this poem does your Heavenly calling justice indeed! Your love just dances within these words...it is felt and cherished by all who witness this write...
beautifully penned by an angel...clearly...
you are a blessing my dear!!
Love,
Tammy
xoxoxo
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Such a wonderful little ditty about your daughter. The rhythm and rhyme were perfect, allowing the words to roll right off my tongue like a little song.
Well done with this, I loved it! (I'm sure your daughter will too)
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This ias such a sweet and loving piece. I really enjoyed this piece and it reminded me of how much I feel about my own children
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This put a huge... rather bittersweet smile on my face. I personally have no real relationship with my mother that I can be proud of... She is the type of person who needs drama so it's always been hard for us to get along and it makes me smile to read pieces about a mother daughter relationship that is as beautiful as this. Well done.
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oh Cathy this was so beautiful!! Just gorgeous, a wonderfulw rite my friend!!!
Blessings, ~Michaela~
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This is beautiful - Nice job - you have some really good pieces
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This is absolutly beautiful! Everything about it, the flow, meter and the message. I love the aabb rhyme scheme.
Love,
Amera♥
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Stunning
Stunning writing here. Wonderful flow of words that are full of dedications of love to your daughter. Wonderful wonderful writing.
Love always
Wayne
x
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