In this private garden
We eat raw apples
Dirty
Taste
Of
Knowledge,
But do it knowingly
So we will not choke.
That sibilant
S
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P
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N
T
S
L
I
T
H
E
R
S
(But you ignore it
Like Narcissus
You care for Eve alone)
Author notes
My first attempt at DP so if it's not real DP I'm sorry I did try though
Comments
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I'm new here, so I have no idea what DP is, but I do know I enjoyed this piece. I especially like how you ended the piece. Well done.
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Not yet familiar with this form but enjoyed your write immensely, very clever well done!
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