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The End

The earth rumbles
The trees shake
The buildings sway
The pavements break
The living scatter
The dead sing
The light fades
The bells ring

As I dance in this Autumn rain
All that surrounds me, starts to break
Bit by bit begins to fade
The smile I wear is fake

The wind builds up and the oceans churn
The moon dissolves and the sun explodes
Darkness swallows all
And the world implodes

Sucked into a black hole
Everything is lost
This is what we deserve
This is what our actions cost

It cost us...
The end

Author notes

Will we be the cause of our own demise?

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  • Polkadot Cadaver
    December 17, 2007

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    absolutly awesome

    i love it....and i think we have already begun the demise...but i guess i couldnt expect anything else....keep up the fantastic writing


    • Medea.Macabre
      December 17, 2007
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      I know, people just don't understand what they are doing. I just hope my death is quick and painless... lol!

      Thank you for your comment!