Quick,Quick,Quick!
Soon you lick.
If you don't pick,
Someone will lick.
It's too late!
See...
Your Icecream melts!
Author notes
Icecream can be compared to the opportunities in life. If one loses to use them in time, then it will be benifitted by the other. So lick the icecream before it melts. I enjoy to compete in this world as I enjoy to eat icecreams.
20 words.
A contest entry
- Tidings Of Comfort And Joy- Poems Of Positive Energy by Mercury Rising.
850 points, ended December 19, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Do you eat icecreams before they melt?
Comments
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Your words are sure true here. I've often thought that myself!
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you can tell I've been drinking...I always take dirty ways on things
I love icecreams, I like mint choc chip.
Yeah I suppose it can be compared to life, as if you don't take it others will take it for you and there is no chance of getting it back. Great metaphor. -
Quite a delightful little poem with an original metaphor. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this excellent piece.
David
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