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Malevolent Desire

My heart is on fire
With this malevolent desire.

The strength and power of my passion
Is so unholy, in its fashion.
Staring thoughtfully into space
Only seeing your wonderous face.

I want to hold you, kiss you, caress you
Make you shiver.
Touch you, tease you
Squeeze and please you.

You've got my heart set on fire
Wanting you with this malevolent desire

To lay you down, onto my bed
Your many clothes, I would shed.
Explore your skin with the lightest touch
To kiss you now, I want it so much.

To taste your wonderous lips once more
Caressing your tongue with my own.
Sucking biting, gentle nips
Feeling your skin between my lips.

I want to light your heart's fire
With this passionate malevolent desire.

Author notes

Yes, yes I know. It's extremely different. Anyways, this is for Bek...I don't know what you'll think, but the title jumped out at me.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 9, 2007
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    This is truely a heart warming description of the heart where you defined the story of the love in melodious words ..this is a sweet poem touching the sentiments of the true lover here descrining the scenario of the loveful heart..I love this piece..you did a wonderful job here..thanks for sharing this write..well done...


  • morbidgothchick
    December 5, 2007
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    good

    it was really good, nice details


  • PinUpLovesGreaser
    December 5, 2007
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    wow, very passionate... two thumbs way up

  • Shadow Darkstar
    December 4, 2007

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    Hm. Slightly hot and steamy. Whewt! Someone get a fan! This is nice, considering I know it's different from what you normally write. Courageous for going out on a limb, especially in a contest.

    Good luck.