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Your words sliced
silence - over the phone.
Ten years
will serve as memory
starting today
Inamorata,
I love you still.
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Written December 4, 2007
A contest entry
- Contemplations: The Airport Wait by Cat.
1200 points, ended December 26, 2007, 11 entries
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Awww this makes me feel so sad to me. I can relate to how you feel, as my hearts been torn recently too and I will always love them.
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AWESOME!!!!
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to be honest, i think you should have won gold. this is fabulous
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damned good!
yepp... succinctness and serving the contest well.. i really like this one too..
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I really like the simplicity of this piece- the long silenced echoed in the open spaces and tight wording- Not sure that it is exactly what we were looking for in the contest as far as content- I'll be curious to see gillian's take on that..
i do really like the poem -
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omg....
So beautiful..speechless..this is excellent...
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