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tear drops

my life is like a black hole I'm all alone with no won there beside me i th-out there was someone there for every won every won but me i just wish that there was someone there for me to but that's just a wish.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 4, 2007

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    OHHH sweety there's gotta be someone. And remember that God is always there with you keep your head up kiddo. Cara