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Painting a Life.

It compares to a rushing torrent of murky depths.
Too powerful to swim back.
Too vague to see ahead.
Too swift to tread the water for an extended period of time.
Many souls are brought into your own.
What makes the difference is what becomes of the two of you.
Simply one cannot survive for long by himself.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 10, 2007

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    So true

    We all need each other to survive so why are we fighting so . Its a question that has never been answered

  • SnowLion
    December 4, 2007
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    Short, but thoughtful. I especially like the penultimate line. Thanks for sharing.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Love...

    Seems to be alot like life.. needing oxogen to breathe.
    Thanks for sharing, I like this, very thought-provoking~

    Peace, and pen on poet~

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~