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Isolation

Stale and stagnant stench~assaulting the nose
like old rusted paint cans discarded in rows

Cold empty space echoing silently
Ghosts of the past struggling to break free

Shadows too weak to filter the gloom
Merciless isolation foresees impending doom

 

Stale and stagnant stench~assaulting the nose

Deadening the senses as life comes to a close 

Author notes

prompt: Fragrance of Isolation

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  • Grey Mouser
    December 10, 2007

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    Wonderfully descriptive and dark, as last moments find the olfactory presence to haunt the mind. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • LovesPlayToy
    December 7, 2007

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    loved it @@@

    u write really poems

    im scared of u!!!

    wow u should really think about publishing some!!!


  • Desire gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    Oh My!!

    Powerful piece You have penned Sweet One
    Love the rhyme~~
    Magnificent take on the prompt!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • DarkHunter
    December 5, 2007

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    This makes me think of the purfume adverts that are always on television. Fragrance of Isolation by Hugo Boss, wonder if it would sell
    This is a dark piece that works perfect with the prompt and the background is great. Best of luck in the contest.