My bags were packed for my weekly appointment
Salty words peppered with spice
Taking inventory of my special ointments
My secret, personal sensual vice
Wooden plates stiff thoughts with tattered wooden spoons
Within my cupboards of erotic thoughts
Images of seagulls, ducks and loons
Tattooed on women some how I caught
Staring closely with intent my intention was flagged
These therapist remove, doubts from my chest
Hyperventilating excitement muffed and paper bagged
As I paid for visions of buttocks and breast.
Author notes
Don't ask, I don't know where it came from
my prompt words were: paper bag, wooden spoon, buttocks, seagull and pepper. Go figure
A contest entry
- Invite Only 7 by Laura Lamarca.
800 points, ended December 8, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very adorable take on the poem. Delighted in this poem. best to you in the contest. ~blessings always~
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ooooooooo great avatar!!
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Very sexy and seductive...You know I LOVE this
I love the mystery in this piece, especially the last stanza, wonderful job in creating a very tasty image of this event.
Good luck
CoCo
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Hey coco - this was just a weird thought that turned into a scene at a strip club. Strange huh? Thanks sweetie
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Yay!!!
I love it...you implemented those words so well & you rhymed too 
I can honestly say, I'm proud of you! Well done with this and good luck in the judging. Laura x 
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Thanks Laura - I working on the simile and metaphors. I think I'm good with imagery but my interpretation of simile and metaphors get confused so I want to practice with it. And would love for you to dissect and critique the work. and thanks again
Mykeeee
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Your random words are: paper bag, wooden spoon, buttocks, seagull and pepper Good luck!
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Here it is
This was weird. Hope I started my lessons of similes, metaphors and imagery.
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i will be back to relax your most unrestless thoughts
and help you coctail a great write gorgeous
(((sexy giggles))) i hope you don't mind i will be back until then
rose petals
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