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Late Night

And if you are good
and if you are nice
and do what you should
and are quiet as mice

tonight you may go
to the land of TV
for an hour or so
to see what you see

Sometimes there are fights
sometimes there are tears
but always those nights
We soothe those fears

Whether its Freddy or Jason
Or the closet door they may stray in
We know just what to do
And its all just for you

We search the whole house
And not even a mouse
could hide from our sight...
SO GO TO SLEEP, ALL RIGHT?!




Author notes

Argh, I tried on this. Yes, I switched the rhyme type in the fourth stanza, but I don't think it hurt my flow to do that.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 12, 2007

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    Thank-you for your entry, this was a great contest and your poem added to that. Please enter as many of the later rounds as you feel able, we'd love to have you.
    Jeff and Sue