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hands of forgiveness

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I think she could see the shovel move
picking and turning powdery snow
with the residue rising to bearded chin
like so many winter days before;
different now, staring from same window.

And it was a snowy day that brought
the bare shovel to quiet,
the grip of cold seized suddenly
and fell into coldest blanket and white;

forgotten were the days
the hand raised itself
and struck in anger
venting rage, and pain
raining most ugly upon gentle woman;

no, forgotten are upturned bottles
and ravenous ruin of drink and excess
all put aside in her fervent wish
to turn back the hands... of time.

 

 

 

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Consider the painting Deep-Snow-and-a-Lone-Well-Used-Shovel-Photograph-steven st.john

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  • michael thomas
    December 5, 2007
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    I am honored to have been in the contest with you, a great writer.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 5, 2007

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    Oh, I so want to nwo more.... you are beginning to really get in to her character... ty so much for this entry... you have hinted..and my cretive mind filled in some gaps...bravo.