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Gaudy (Cinquain)

Gaudy
Tastelessly clad
beauty overshadowed
hiding what's good accenting bad
So sad.

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Gaudy is my word.

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  • RuthKephart
    December 5, 2007
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    This piece brought a smile to my face this morning. What great use of your word prompt and oh how true this piece is. I've only written a few cinquains so I won't even pretend to judge you on the form itself...but as for the poem, I enjoyed Thank you for your entry
    Ruth