Somethings missing,
It's just not there,
Feeling so empty,
So cold,
So bare.
I feel content,
But nothing more,
Day by day,
Hour by hour,
Emptiness.
Needing the feeling,
The touch,
Of you,
Lost in the clouds,
The endless sea of blue.
Standing still,
Around me is a blur,
Colors and mists,
Staring into space,
Space, Emptiness,
Nothing else, anymore.
Shining tiny stars,
Butterflies in my chest,
Daydreams wandered far,
Now where have they gone.
Underwater with no air,
Love with no trust,
Tears with no emotions,
Hands with no soul.
It's me, desensitized,
Nothing remains.
No dreams to pursue,
No laughing till I cry,
No pain in my heart,
No thoughts in my head,
Emptiness.
E m p t i n e s s ...
A contest entry
- Anything goes.. by IamRemy.
625 points, ended December 16, 2007, 29 entries
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aww. so sad... that was a great write..
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thanks you im glad you like my poems
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Awwww I know what you're talking here, this feeling is hard to bare...emptiness...You expressed it so well here...I do hope things are better for you by now...or at least be better in time...
Take care hun
XXJeannette
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very sad poem, i know what this empty feeling feels like. It is very lonely kind of numbing.
I hope things get better
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