Through time and space
with the love that I feel
of God's amazing grace
I finally found something real.
I could've spent
the rest of my life,
dealing with heartache
and suffering in strife.
Without a lover's prayer
to be answered or come true
so thankful that last night
I gave my heart to you.
No longer afraid
to face the night,
knowing I've got someone,
who will love me right.
This Christmas
won't be like the one before,
because I found love this year,
to cherish & calm all my fear.
In the time that we've spent
talking to one another
I realized that I want you
and not any other.
So, God I thank you
for sending me this angel
even though Christmas is yet to come
You've graced me with the one.
Author notes
I'd just like to say that when I can feel like this about someone it would be indeed an honor and so amazing. I look forward to it with each passing day.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Very Merry Romantic Christmas by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended December 24, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling All Christmas Posts by daviscth.
450 points, ended December 20, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please do not critique this. I want happy comments not sad
Comments
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I love your style! For love its absolutely beautiful!
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This sounds like something I could have written after wedding my husband. I loved the imagery you put into it. Thank you for posting in my contest and all the best at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy
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nice word
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Very sweet bro! Glad that your heart is finally
complete! May this relationship of yours last
a lifetime and may you find continuous love
and laughter in each other's company. Good luck
to you with this one!
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Very nice work here
And if its true then god bless you both to fly always together as one
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Wow!
This is so very beautiful. Spectacular write. Love is a percious thing.
Best Wishes,
-Nessa
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So Sweet
I love your write of gratitude for the one you've waited for and love. You write so nicely and with Gods loving words. Thank you for sharing with me. She is blessed to have you as well!!
Blessings
Kelle Marie,
stavykm
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Awww ...
This is simply amazing ...
It's your heart on the paper ...
"Without a lover's prayer
to be answered or come true
so thankful that last night
I gave my heart to you"
This is an amazing stanza ...
It captures everything in four lines ...
VERY well done!
Congrats!
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that was absolutely beautiful!
new blooming love is so ..red rosy cheeks, belly full
of laughter, mistletoe wonderful!!
I am so happy you wrote this for her, I'm sure she
twinkled bright as the christmas stars above her!!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : )) loved this poem!
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well done ....bravo grab her man ..OOHHH thank goodness... whew....i was hoping youd find someone nice and sweet. She deserves it
Congrats on the new romance.
Tory
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Bless you and your angel and may you have the best Christmas ever and may God's love wrap around both of you and keep you safe and happy always. Loved this write very much. x
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very romantic holiday write my friend. nice rhyme and flow. Glad you found someone to share happiness with. That's always nice.
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wow this is so cool! i love it.
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Awe... What lovely christmas romance spilling from your words.
As usual your flow is flawless.
Good luck to you in the contest.
love,
Delila
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Its a very sweet and touching piece with lots of heart in it
An uplifting read I really enjoyed
Cindy
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yeah! I hope she treats you right she sounds lovely hope all works out fantastic you desereve this your friend
stacey
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How beautiful!!
Simply Fantastic, It's realistic & express the real feelings of someone in love. The perfect love, the perfect sharing, the perfect feeling, is what we all seem to be looking for. Some find it and some dream of it.
It is nice to be inloved specially if we think he/she is the right one..a very special person if he/she is that person that you can sit and have a cup of coffee with, or you can just walk along holding hands, share your days problems and accomplishments with and know that you are in the company of a very special entity!!!
Best Wishes!
~~GRACE~~
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This is beautiful, so romantic. I'm glad you found someone to love you as you should be loved.
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Awww! this was so beautiful and touching sweetheart. I lovedit so much, and I too am so glad to have found you. I'm glad we finally have each other, after waiting so long for the true angel we had waited to have in our lives. This is amazing
and I really like it when you call me honey, that is the new nickname for you to call me now *hugs n kisses*
Love
~~Victoria~~
o.s. when I tried to comment on this the first time I liked that one more, but this will have to do.
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This is a really sweet Christmas poem not my favorite Holiday but this is an excellent piece thanks for sharing best wishes
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Beautiful..
A lovely piece my friend.
Thanks for sharing this lover's song.
May you both grow in eternal bliss.
Peace, love, and happiness~
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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awwwww
im so happy for you. i hope it stays that way
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Wow!that is really sweet!merry chirstmas!
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Sweet.
That was sweet. Always amazing when people find love. Fine work.
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It is a most awesome thing when we find the one who completes us; the one who fulfills the emptiness in our hearts
Thank you for sharing a truly beautiful piece!
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you and yours!!!
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