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Hotel Past

Welcome to The Past
[I hope you enjoy your stay]
Check in at the desk,
Find yourself a room,
and settle in,
[you'll be here for a while]
Order room service,
Watch some tv,
[and make it worth your while]
Maybe even take a nap
in your queen sized bed,
[dream of the memories you will never make]
Or go for a swim in
our luxury pool,
[surround yourself with the chances you didn't want to take]
Take a trip down to the lounge,
Spend some time over at the bar,
[just drink away the thoughts of the girl you let slip away]
Slide into the tub
and take a bubble bath or two
[try to wash away all the feelings you have to hide]
And when your stay is over
leave your keys at the front desk,
[if only your heart could do the same]
They'll always be available
upon your wayward return,
[you are destined to become a frequent guest]

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  • LivingxXxProof
    December 4, 2007
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    I like this one. it's unique. Not like everything everyone else on the site writes.


  • Cold Blue Eyes
    December 4, 2007
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    This is a really cool concept. Very orginal. I like your use of brackets.