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The Fire


It was black and thick
The wisp of smoke came up from the fire
The flames rose and the snow came down
I watched the house burn down
Then as I walked away there was a voice
It came form the flames
I looked and a small body came out
Tears cme to my eyes
For there covered in ash was my sister

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my word was wisp

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  • RuthKephart
    December 5, 2007

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    Please check the rules for this contest and make the appropriate changes...your word must be used in the title. Thanks!
    As for this I certainly hope it is not based on a true story. Thank you for the entry
    Ruth