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Like a Car Accident

get over it.
i am a bitch
i swear
i yell
stomp. hit.
i cause a scene.
but you cant help but love me.

its almost like a car accident.
you anticipate the cringe of seeing it
try to block out the sound of crunching metal
but you cant help but to slow your car down and take a look.

get over it
i am kind
i sing
i dance
love. laugh.
i cause a scene.
but you cant help but love me anyways.

tell me your heart rate doesnt escalate
when you see those flashing lights.
and you look around for the source of the sirens.
and inside a part of you prays that they arent coming for me
while another secretly asks God for them to be.

Please tell me what you think

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  • ItalianGurrl
    December 4, 2007
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    WOOOO! awesome!!!!! i havent read such a good poem in a while! this would be awesome if read in a poetry slam. i love it!!! it reminds me of me lol this is really amazing, and i sooooo mean it! i cant help but smile right now, that's how good it was. im impressed!!! =D

    Rachel*


    • Sunless
      December 4, 2007
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      thank you, i havent written anything like that in a while.