I have a grudge.
The grudge is mine.
The grudge is
against one man.
Despite what you say
I will keep my grudge.
The grudge I have
will only grow.
The grudge will help
me to get my revenge.
The grudge I keep will
only give me strength.
The grudge is but a tool
set up for my revenge.
The grudge is made me
to be slick and sly.
The grudge is apain
for anyone in my way.
The grudge is what no
man shall have from me.
This is the grudge that
has made me strong.
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Comments
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I really don't think it's necessary to repeat the word "the grudge" I think it breaks the flow of the piece to repeat as often as you do ~ Try every other ~ if you must ~ Grudges do tend to grow ~ and they come in many forms ~
Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ i do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you ~ -
Interesting poem. Keep it up. ( =
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