Lying in this hosptail bed
All I see is walls
I'm can barely keep my eyes open
But thinking about my love keeps me living
I am going to miss my love
All the time we spent laughing
And loving one another
I know it's hard for him
I see his tears
The look in his eye
Tells me he can't live without me
I try and tell him,"Everything is going to be ok!"
He looks to the floor and shakes his head no
I say to him,"When I'm in heaven I will be looking after you"
Just know when it rains,
I'm crying because I miss you so
Just know when it sunny
I'm smiling because I see your happy
Just know when it's storming
I'm angry because your sad
Every time the weather changes,even when you see the stars,it's me
I'm always going to be here for you
Even if you can't see me
I'll be in here
Watching over you
And always in yout heart
Author notes
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Comments
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First I want to ask you to please not 5 star my comment or comment me back in anyway, only because I am trying real hard not to find out who anyone is at this time.
Your poem is so very sad. It is hard on everyone to watch a love one die, it is also hard on the person who is dying to leave their love ones. I work in a hospital and I seemed more people die then I care to remember. It really breaks my heart each time. As sad as it may be I enjoyed reading your write. Your told such a loving story.
Thanks so for entering my cont est and good luck.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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I really loved this, its perfect for what i was after!!
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