It is raining despair,
who Will I fear?
The pain is real,
but the fear is worse.
The world is thriving,
but so is the fear.
My heart is beating,
and the fear is eating.
Eating me alive the
fear is hurting.
I have a new life,
but the fear is invading.
All around is happiness,
but inside is the fear.
Though The Vally Of The Shadow Of
Death is haunting me in my fear.
Who will stand
against my fear.
Author notes
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Nice poem! Please run spell check...there are many spelling mistakes in this piece. Don't worry, it won't lower this poem in my judging. Great write and good luck in the contest!
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oh yeah, please put the option number in the authors notes.
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ok, thank you
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wow, i like this alot, great write, and good luck in the contest =)
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Short, but very sweet
Maybe that's not the right word to describe it, but the style, I mean.
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