Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

It Is Following Her

It Is Following Her
by: StickNote5

It is following her.
A creature of the night,
A friend to the dark.
The shadows are its strength
And she is its weakness.

The evil creature of the dark,
Has followed the unsuspecting pray into its habitat
And on the bed she lay,
The creature lay with her.
And as she turns out her light
She notices a presence in her room.

It is a nightmare,
Finding its way back
To the creature who created it.
Alive and well, living on the fear of others;
The nightmare has turned real.

A contest entry

what is the picture you get when reading this poem

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 9, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Spooky, you did nicely on this. Vampire? or something more abstract? I like this, good job.


    • StickyNote5
      December 10, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks

      I am glad that someone appreciates my work. All of my poems come from the heart and sole