keep cinderella's show
snow white can eat her apple
no tower walls can make me wait
i shall live
and if prince charming doesn't catch me while i run
it is his lifetime loss
i shall embrace the sun and
make love to the music
Please tell me what you think
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This is very good! I believe that you will find your prince, just remember that you are young and have plunty of time to find him.
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i really like how you caught me in the first 2 lines, making me wonder what the poem was going to be about.
i especially liked the middle:
"no tower walls can make me wait
i shall live
and if prince charming doesn't catch me while i run
it is his lifetime loss"
it makes the narrator seem like a rebellious princess, one that doesn't need a prince to set her free. she can handle the dragon by herself.
good job Vivs!
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