Wild like the winds,
wild like the seas,
wild like the trees,
we blow upon the winds.
Fire, earth, wind, and water;
we are all really wild.
Will we tear away the roots
of the most advanced trees?
With our unburning disires
and loves we need our wild selves.
Wildly we laid in bed with our
earthly breaths.
The fires of our passions could
never be controled by the weather.
The calmness of the winds
on which we made our nests
could never be blown away
just like our love.
No matter how much water our
love can never be abated.
Therefore we are wild
in our fucking selves.
A contest entry
- Make me feel dark and emotional. Lots of options!! by Kia Tenshi.
600 points, ended December 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 2008, 184 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is an interesting write ~ you take it in a different level ~ Nice job overall
Thanks so much for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ Best of luck to you! -
I always like unique, and this has got that going for it.
A very well worded piece, and thanks for sharing.
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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thank you for the complament
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