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shine haiku/senryu







sheer crackle of voice
heat through diaphanous
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might edit a line like last, originally 'emphasized' began it

good luck isn't how exhaustive I want it to be

emoticons and the applause can be kept out of beautiful full comment

my public reply is prompted after anonymous contest

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  • IamRemy
    December 4, 2007
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    Thank you for joining!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    Well versed piece, wish you all the best in the contest. Because you're such a great poet.. and a nice guy.