Cross my heart
And hope to die
Can you tell me it was all true
Or did you lie
When you said I love you
Tell me they were true
All the I love you's
Because I'm finding it hard to believe
That it's all over
Maybe I should have seen it coming
Just like a rain shower
Temptation takes took its toll
Ending us
Breaking me down
Till I feel like nothing
Close to breaking down
Thanks so much
For destroying not only me
But my heart as well
No one could do it as well as you did, and I really do mean no one
The funny part about all this is
No matter how much I hate you
No matter what I do
I'll always love you
And right now that’s what I hate the most about you
You hold this power over me
A power I can't begin to explain
You'll never get it
Never get it through that brain
That I love you
And hate you
I'll never be over you
And it will take forever to be friends with you.
And I don’t think I can do it
Sorry to disappoint you
You hurt me more then you'll ever know
Well what else is new
Broken again by yet another
Loves never there
Then again neither are you
But still nothing will compare
To what I feel for you.
Author notes
This is just about everything i have to say to my ex.
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Comments
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I liked this really showed the pain of a broken heart. The flow was amazing your poem is a talanted one
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That is pretty good, just needs some tweaking up with spelling and such. I could tell you had a lot to say when you wrote this-
Good luck,
Vivien
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