Ah, sweet melody.
The aphrodisiac of our hearts.
As our mind wander,
Our souls ache for the quintessential feeling to fill our veins.
To make the heart beat,
To make the sprit glow,
So that raw energy may be released,
To fuel the world with all that matters.
I want the floors to shake,
I want the walls to shatter.
I want to scream until my hole of a throat feels vacant and bare.
Early rises, over sunsetting moons.
I want to feel...
Alive.
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A contest entry
- Pre-writes & Fresh Writes Welcome Here! by LadyUnique.
300 points, ended January 17, 2008, 65 entries
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Comments
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very cool i liked this alot.. luv the imagery lots. nice work =]
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lovely use of words, short, to the point. fills my head with images, theres lots of feelings on this. good poemy
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Very Nice
Alex hun you sure know how to feel alive... very well written poem with a great theme that you've captured brilliantly in your few lines... too bad it didn't win for it sure seems to have that shiny winning streak... emotions so well expressed... thanks for sharing your talent with us... take care Minoo
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ah yes... wanting a reason and energy to flow through our veins... introspective write
thanks for your entry and good luck
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