Satan gave my gift to me,
I sold my soul at thirty three,
priceless words of misery,
flow as streams to poisoned sea.
Satan said the deal must stick,
trouble is the times gone quick,
he's just called to give a kick,
welcome to hell, your tourguides Nick.
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welcome to hell...
I've heard that so many times, lol...
Again, I don't know how this makes me feel, but it's good.
[stay sick']
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Sounds like a crappy christmas travelogue...but its funny in a random way. Liked it. Later, AG
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Thanks...I think.
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LOL. On the second read I still like this but I got a different feel from it. Like, a divorce maybe. Good poetry is like that though, I think anyway. Changes color in a different light. Good stuff, still. Later, AG
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I hate to say how much I like this but I do. It is beyond excellent. Hope you got a good price. I just lost a good friend named Nick a few weeks ago. He would of dug this too. I hope you don't really believe in all that shit like satan...wait you believe in satan and not God? Confusing but EXCELLENT!
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Love It! This is original and I love the title... perfect
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Clever
I really liked this one, old Saint Nick. LOL.
Thanks for sharing, and I just wanted to take a look.
And I thought it was very good.
Thanks for sharing, peace.
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