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Frozen Fluff

It always reminds me of frozen fluff
Falling it's way to the ground

It melts onto my tongue
With the flavor of water

Packing it together
Into a ball

Looking like an ice sphere
Shaped in my hand

When it falls
Everything is peaceful

It's like the blanket
Calms everybody down

I love when frozen fluff
Falls on the ground.

Author notes

I LOVE SNOW

A contest entry

Hooray for snow!

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 9, 2008
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    you described it all really well thanks for entering


  • BonaFidePoet
    December 4, 2007

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    Yaaaaay KT i luv snow 2!!!!!! mwhahahahah weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol but this is what gets me:

    It melts onto my tongue
    With the flavor of water

    lol water doesnt have a flavor.. lol